Tuesday, June 9, 2015

Our First Western Story For Our Writer's Challenge By: Elizabeth Lawrence

For Want of A Hero
 1875

     Rain pelted against the roof of the ranchhouse that was nestled in the mountains of Western Colorado.  Inside, the bright flames of the fireplace cast flickering shadows.  A man, his strong features weathered by the sun and wind, settled in an oak rocking chair and a little girl climbed up into his lap.  “Tell us a story, father.”

    Two older children, a boy and a girl, scooted closer and sat comfortably at his feet.  James looked at his three children and smiled, “What kind of story would you like to hear?”

    His son, Matthew, spoke first, “A story about a hero!”

    “Ah,” James settled back in the rocking chair and his youngest, snuggled against his chest.  The rain had steadied into a gentle patter on the roof.  “Then you will like this story.”

    “Have we heard it before, father?”

    James looked at his oldest child, Juliana.  She had the same flashing, blue eyes as her mother.

     He smiled, “No, I have not told this story before.  And the best thing about this story, is that it all really happened.”

    The children nodded eagerly, and gathered closer, their eyes glittering brightly.  James cleared his throat and began.  “His name was Alejandro (Al-e-hondro) Montoya la Rosa Ramirez.”

     “That is a long name,” Susanna murmured, yawning as she tipped her head back against her father’s chest.  James smiled again and stroked her smooth, black hair.

     “That it was.  He was a proud young man, and a true mestizo.

    “A mestizo?” Juliana questioned.

    “Stop interrupting, I want to hear the story,” Matthew complained.  He wrinkled his nose and glared at his two sisters.

    “A mestizo is someone from multiple races,” James explained.  “This young man’s great grandfather had been a Spaniard, and he had inherited some of his features: dark, blue eyes, and a firm jaw.  His coppery, brown skin and straight, black hair came from his grandmother’s side.  She had been a full blooded Comanche of the Huuzinuu, Timber People Band of the south.”

    “His only living relative was his sister.  The rest of the family had been killed in an Apache raid, shortly after he reached the age of sixteen years.  He was skilled with a gun, as his father had been a pistolero, gunslinger.  Alejandro wasn’t quite as fast as his father, but he was accurate.  He didn’t lack courage, and hired himself out as an armed escort to a wagon train that was heading west, leaving his sister in the village.  The family that took her in had been friends of their family for many years.”

    “There was work enough to keep him occupied, but following a dusty trail of slowly lumbering cattle and wagons soon wore thin on his nerves.  He had wanted adventure, something to distract him from his grief of losing his family.  Too often the broad expanse of nothingness left his hands empty and his heart aching.  Once they reached their destination, a friend persuaded him to leave the wagon train and join a Comanchero band.”

     “The Comancheros consisted of Hispanic traders, half breeds, Indians, and other mestizos like himself which traveled in bands and traded goods, tools, tobacco, guns, and gunpowder to the Great Plains Indian tribes of New Mexico and west Texas.  Some men grew increasingly wealthy trading with the Indians. ”

     “That must have been exciting!” Matthew exclaimed.

     “Well it wasn’t too exciting, not at first.  Sometimes they got their trading supplies by questionable means.  It wasn’t too long before trading led to thieving, and thieving led to murder.  The band became increasingly bold and tried robbing a stage coach that was escorted by the US Cavalry.  That fatal encounter was a turning point in Alejandro’s life.  He did not wish to become a bandit, buried in a shallow grave, with no one to know who he was.”

     “It had been two years, but he returned to his home village.  His sister was overjoyed to see him, and he longed for the peace that she had.  His short time as a bandit hadn’t fulfilled his desire and need for acceptance, and his heart was twisted with bitterness.  He took note of how his sister read daily from a small book and he concluded that it was from this small book, she got her strength and peace.”

    “When he asked her what it was, she told him it was a Bible, and that it would change his life.  At first, he didn’t quite believe her, but then one day, he found the small book laying on the stand next to his bed.  He picked it up and began to read.  His sister had marked several passages and he read them with tears in his eyes.  He accepted the Lord Jesus as his Savior then.”

    Juliana’s smile widened, “I love this story, father.  I am glad he became a Christian.”

    Matthew frowned, “He still didn’t find the adventure he wanted.”

    “The story isn’t over yet children, we have scarcely started,” James assured them.  His eyes lifted to the window, and watched the rain trickle down the glass.  After a moment, he continued, “After a series of droughts, Alejandro decided to take his sister east.  They journeyed for several weeks, finally arriving in Western Colorado.  He was soon hired to work on a ranch by the name of Pine Springs.”

    “This was perhaps the happiest time of their life.  They both settled in quickly to ranch life.  His sister was able to help the lady of the ranch with cooking, cleaning, mending, and other household duties.  And Alejandro loved being in the saddle and working with horses.  He proved to be a hard worker, and trustworthy.  He had the other men’s respect.  Not only that, but the small pile of silver coins was growing in the leather bag he kept hidden under his mattress.  It wouldn’t be long before they had enough money saved to buy a small ranch of their own.”

     Matthew squirmed and then placed a hand on his father’s knee.  James paused and looked at him questioningly.  “Father,” Matthew blurted out.  “How could they have enough for a ranch so soon?  Ranch hands do not get paid enough to start their own ranch.”

    James chuckled, “Very true Matthew.  I suppose that I neglected to mention that Alejandro’s father had left a sizeable inheritance for them.  That money hadn’t been touched until the day Alejandro used some of it, to present a small gift to the family who had cared for his sister while he had been away, much of their inheritance was still intact.”

     “Well, it seems that all is going very well for them.”  Matthew settled himself more comfortably, “He almost has enough to buy a ranch, he loves horses, and everyone likes them.”

    James shook his head, “Not everyone.  You see, the rancher’s son had taken a particular disliking to Alejandro.”

    Juliana brushed the hair from her eyes, “Why is that father?”

    “It seemed that because the rancher’s son was already going to inherit his father’s land and wealth, he hadn’t exerted himself to work very hard or make very many friends.  It was common knowledge that Alejandro was saving for a ranch of his own.  He was smart, hardworking, honest, and would treat the men he hired with respect.  It wouldn’t be much of a surprise that most of the men that were working for his father, would ride for Alejandro once the rancher’s son became boss.”

    “The rancher’s son hated to lose.  He envied the respect that the other men gave Alejandro, and after Alejandro headed off a stampede, he envied the courage the young man showed as well.  Rather than exerting himself to become what he envied, he put down Alejandro every chance he got.  He insulted him, assigned him to do the least liked jobs, and tried to make Alejandro’s life downright miserable.  And because the father was busy and often on trips, there was really no one to intervene on Alejandro’s behalf.”

    “When the rancher’s son learned that Alejandro had been a pistolero, he badgered him, trying to get Alejandro to draw on him.  Alejandro was faster than the young man, he could have killed him in a split second before the rancher’s son even had a chance to clear the holster.  However, he was a Christian.  He wouldn’t allow the young man’s foolishness, to influence him to act rashly.”

     “The tension mounted between the two.  On several occasions, Alejandro nearly confronted the rancher’s son.  And then one day, an event happened that led to the climax of changing everything.  A cougar had been attacking the livestock, several calves had been lost.  The ranch could not suffer the loss of livestock and so it was decided that the ranch hands would hunt the big cat, and kill it.”

    “This was the opportunity that the rancher’s son had been waiting for, if he could kill the big cat himself, he would secure himself a good position in the growing community.  Several other ranches in the area also agreed to hunt the cat.  The big day arrived and the men were divided in groups.  Alejandro was placed in the same group as the rancher’s son.  It was a big disappointment for the young rancher.”

     “The day wore on without finding any fresh tracks.  Then, in the late afternoon, beside a pool of water, recent tracks were found.  So eager was the rancher’s son, that he insisted on riding ahead of the procession as the path became more narrow.  So intent was he on following the tracks, that he forgot to pay attention to his surroundings and he didn’t notice the big cat perched on the rocks above him.  It was a good thing that Alejandro did, because just as the cougar sprang, a shot rang out from Alejandro’s rifle.  The cat fell dead just beyond its intended victim.  Had the cat been able, he would have most likely broken the neck of the young rancher.”

     “In view of that, you might have thought that the rancher’s son would have been grateful to Alejandro for saving his life, but he wasn’t.  The fact that it had been Alejandro to kill the cougar and not him, angered him beyond reason.”

     Juliana frowned.  “He is a very selfish young man.  To hold a grudge against Alejandro for no reason!”

    James smiled, “You must remember that the rancher’s son wasn’t a Christian.  And when one doesn’t follow the leading of God’s word, they are more apt to make poor choices.”    

     “The story doesn’t end there, however.  A band of Comancheros were in the area, and they needed money and supplies.  They hadn’t had a successful raid in many weeks and they were getting desperate.  They captured the rancher’s son and several other men while they were branding cattle and demanded a ransom.   It took only an hour for sufficient funds to be raised, but the sheriff put together a posse to capture the renegade band as soon as the men were ransomed.  All that was needed, was someone to deliver the ransom.  Because of the danger, none of the men were willing to risk their lives, except for Alejandro.”

    “He went up to the cliffs and delivered the ransom.  But the Comanchero leader was a wily man and he sensed the trap.  He decided to take a hostage to ensure a successful escape.  The unlucky man would be sold to the Indians or across the border as a slave.  Such a fate was cruel one and each of the men cowered at such a thought.  Without a word, Alejandro stepped forward and it was understood by all that he would be the captive.”

    “The men were relieved and ashamed at the same time.  Relieved because it was not they who would be sentenced to certain death, and ashamed because they lacked the courage to do that which Alejandro was doing now.  The rancher’s son, at last, realized his own selfishness and almost volunteered to go in Alejandro’s place, but the gentle shake of his head, made him remain silent.”

    “As Alejandro rode behind the Comancheros with his wrists bound, the men were sure that it would be the last they ever saw of him.  After all, Alejandro himself knew the dangers and likelihood of rescue was slim.  He had already asked the old rancher to care for his sister, should he not come back.  Since he had been a young man of unusual strong confidence, the preparation of a looming death, was a testament in itself,” James sighed deeply, and lapsed into silence as he stared at the fire.

    “But father, did he die?”  Juliana’s lips quivered. 

     “Of course he died,” Matthew interrupted.  “Heroes always die, that is why they are heroes.”

    “A hero is simply an individual with courage to suffer adversity, nobly,” James said, “It doesn’t necessarily mean someone who died.”

    “Then did he die?”

    James was interrupted with the guard dog, Collie, barking outside.   She was alerting them to a visitor.  Matthew scrambled to his feet and raced to the window.  “It is Uncle Andro!  Uncle Andro is here.”


    Juliana tugged at her father’s arm, “Please finish the story father, I must know how it ends.  Did Alejandro die?”

    He smiled, “You shall see for yourself in a moment.”

    It was then that Uncle Andro made an appearance, greeting James and the children.  His wife appeared and embraced the man tightly, “Alejandro, my brother, we are so glad you could visit us.”  She squeezed his hand.

     Juliana stared at her uncle before her eyes widened.  “You mean, you are Alejandro?  Alejandro Ramirez?”

    The strong, broad shoulder man flashed a bright smile.  His blue eyes dancing.  “Yes.”

    Matthew grinned, “So you lived!  I knew you would.”

    “But, what happened to the rancher’s son, did he ever become a Christian?”

    For a moment, both Alejandro and James locked eyes.  Then Alejandro, in his gentle and quiet 
manner, nodded.  “Yes, yes he did.”


  James 3:13   Who is a wise man and endued with knowledge among you? let him shew out of a good conversation his works with meekness of wisdom.

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